Who has not in his days ever
called out to Heaven, "Save me"?
Who has not hurt inside, "I'm
all messed up, take this world
away, leave me to this corner
where I may huddled small be
forgotten by this world"? Who
has not once desired that he
die, and be nothing, ever more?
We have all lived this life alike
in these secret humanities that
we would never dare show of
ourselves, driven by passions
we deny that we have, all of us
mortals with the same red blood
and a heart that breaks. We
can never speak of another soul
without speaking in some way
about our own selves. And He,
the greatest one, He challenged,
"Let he who is without sin
throw the first stone!" — no?
No one? No, not a one dares.
me?!
10:46pm friday, 18th april
this kinda spoke right into my very heart,nice one.but about this god of yours,i studyed him today,and i found he is not as mercyful as one should think,acctually he is quite harsh,those who does not live according to the rules may be striken hard.i bring it up because you frequently quote him,i just wanted to say i saw a very different side of him today...but i guess it is all a matter of interperation,and the reason why there is 40 wholy wars going about in the world today...But bottomline,nice poem!
myra@yahoo.com
1:12pm tuesday, 22nd april
this comment is more for "me" who commented. you say that the God he speaks of is not as merciful as he says. i beg to differ. in the bible, in the old testament, he was harsh. honestly those people would have been killed or tortured anyway. he is as merciful as claimed. why do you think that we are alive today. he sent his only son to die in our place so we wouldn't have to. What exactly do you mean by "striken hard"? yes if you choose not to follow him the punnishment is hell, but like it would be any different for you with out him before you die.
this goes to stand. the poem was great and i thinkthat it's awesome that you get on the computer and share you thoughts with the people that read this site.
Lisa
2:44am sunday, 27th april
LEADERSHIP.......we cannot control others, but we do have control of ourselves (our thoughts, actions, intentions....)
me?!
myra@yahoo.com